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¿Esto suena natural? Also, improvement of the scholastic ability of young people will lead to development of society and technology and so on.
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Also, improving young people's scholastic abilities will lead to the development of society, technology, and so on.
Removing repetitive of's and other prepositions and including more active verbs can make the sentence easier to read and more interesting. You don't have to get rid of all of them though.
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Multiple and's sounds a little unnatural. I would say, "society, technology, and so on."
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Are multiple "of"s OK?
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@Nans It is grammatically correct, but some scholars would say it sounds repetitive. (I never thought anything of it until I took a business writing class.)
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Also, improving young people's scholastic abilities will lead to the development of society, technology, and so on.
Removing repetitive of's and other prepositions and including more active verbs can make the sentence easier to read and more interesting. You don't have to get rid of all of them though.
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