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I have errors??⇩
Last Christmas my parents decided to visit my uncles and my cousins to France. On this trip, it was only me and my parents. My brother could not go because he was sick and my sister stayed home to take care of him. I went to Arreau by car. The trip lasted approximately 4 hours. I was there for a week. During that week I walked the streets, bought postcards and enjoy the views of some landscapes, I was also playing with my cousins in the snow. Sometimes my cousins spoke French and I did not understand what she said. I had a good time and I learned a little more the language.
I have errors??⇩
Last Christmas my parents decided to visit my uncles and my cousins to France. On this trip, it was only me and my parents. My brother could not go because he was sick and my sister stayed home to take care of him. I went to Arreau by car. The trip lasted approximately 4 hours. I was there for a week. During that week I walked the streets, bought postcards and enjoy the views of some landscapes, I was also playing with my cousins in the snow. Sometimes my cousins spoke French and I did not understand what she said. I had a good time and I learned a little more the language.
Last Christmas my parents decided to visit my uncles and my cousins to France. On this trip, it was only me and my parents. My brother could not go because he was sick and my sister stayed home to take care of him. I went to Arreau by car. The trip lasted approximately 4 hours. I was there for a week. During that week I walked the streets, bought postcards and enjoy the views of some landscapes, I was also playing with my cousins in the snow. Sometimes my cousins spoke French and I did not understand what she said. I had a good time and I learned a little more the language.
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Last Christmas, my parents decided to visit my uncles and cousins in France. Only my parents and I went on the trip. My brother couldn't go because he was sick, and my sister stayed home to take care of him. I went to Arreau by car. The trip took about 4 hours. I stayed there for a week. During that week, I had a look around the town, bought postcards and enjoyed the view of some landscapes. I also played with my cousins in the snow: sometimes they spoke French and I didn't understand what they were saying. I had a good time and I learnt a bit more of the language.
I corrected it to what sounds natural to me: your English is very good though!! 😊
Also I changed "walking the streets" because that is a saying here for a prostitute 😂
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