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Music【; ➡︎ .】when I listen to it live, I am astonished at how 【it can be different ➡︎ different it can be】 from 【recorded one ➡︎ re ordings】. I remember a duo concert held in a small 【chamber ➡︎room】where I could hear even the players' breath. I was very familiar with the 【tunes to small details ➡︎ small details of the tune】, and thought their music was delicate and spiritual in the extreme.

【But it was only in a few seconds when ➡︎ After only a few seconds】 I was brought into another world. Who could have expected anything like that! The fiddle was so full of life and joy, whereas the guitar was 【✖️so】 exquisite like a fog that 【came ➡︎ drifted】intoevery fold of notes the fiddler produced. I felt every cell of my whole body was filled with some kinds of actual 【substances ➡︎ substance】; the bliss of music.

Could you correct my English? Sorry it's a bit long.
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Music【; ➡︎ .】when I listen to it live, I am astonished at how 【it can be different ➡︎ different it can be】 from 【recorded one ➡︎ re ordings】. I remember a duo concert held in a small 【chamber ➡︎room】where I could hear even the players' breath. I was very familiar with the 【tunes to small details ➡︎ small details of the tune】, and thought their music was delicate and spiritual in the extreme. 

【But it was only in a few seconds when ➡︎ After only a few seconds】 I was brought into another world. Who could have expected anything like that! The fiddle was so full of life and joy, whereas the guitar was 【✖️so】 exquisite like a fog that 【came ➡︎ drifted】intoevery fold of notes the fiddler produced. I felt every cell of my whole body was filled with some kinds of actual 【substances ➡︎ substance】; the bliss of music.
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