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¿Esto suena natural? I watched Super Bad. Emma stone, who is famous for Spiderman and La-La-Land, acted as a beautiful girl in a school. The personality of her role was kind to not popular boy, which was common in Spiderman. I didn’t notice she was Emma stone, so I was surprised that how different she was from La-La-Land. I think her facial expression is talented. I can remember vividly that she had awkward face when she was listening her boyfriend’s modern jazz concert. The movie was weird. That not popular boy was cherry and wanted to get alcohol for the party. Police officers ran over him and tried to arrest him. The police officers were naughty to ignore signals with fake sirens.
¿Esto suena natural? I watched Super Bad. Emma stone, who is famous for Spiderman and La-La-Land, acted as a beautiful girl in a school. The personality of her role was kind to not popular boy, which was common in Spiderman. I didn’t notice she was Emma stone, so I was surprised that how different she was from La-La-Land. I think her facial expression is talented. I can remember vividly that she had awkward face when she was listening her boyfriend’s modern jazz concert. The movie was weird. That not popular boy was cherry and wanted to get alcohol for the party. Police officers ran over him and tried to arrest him. The police officers were naughty to ignore signals with fake sirens.
Please revise my story if it is not natural
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I watched Super Bad. Emma stone, who is famous for Spiderman and La-La-Land, acted in it as a beautiful schoolgirl. The personality of the character was kind, specifically to a boy who was not very popular, which was common to Spiderman. I didn’t notice at first she was Emma Stone, and I was surprised how different she was from her role in La-La-Land. I think she it very talented in her use of facial expression. I can remember vividly that she had an awkward look on her face when she was listening to her boyfriend’s modern jazz concert. I did however, think the movie Superbad was weird. The unpopular popular boy was trying to get alcohol for a party, when police officers ran over him and tried to arrest him. The police officers were wrong to ignore signals and use fake sirens.
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I watched Super Bad. Emma stone, who is famous for Spiderman and La-La-Land, acted in it as a beautiful schoolgirl. The personality of the character was kind, specifically to a boy who was not very popular, which was common to Spiderman. I didn’t notice at first she was Emma Stone, and I was surprised how different she was from her role in La-La-Land. I think she it very talented in her use of facial expression. I can remember vividly that she had an awkward look on her face when she was listening to her boyfriend’s modern jazz concert. I did however, think the movie Superbad was weird. The unpopular popular boy was trying to get alcohol for a party, when police officers ran over him and tried to arrest him. The police officers were wrong to ignore signals and use fake sirens.
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@kaupaint Thank you so much for two consecutive advise to my questions. Your advise makes me realize how far more rooms I have to improve.
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@Ace111 I hope it also you realize how good you're doing! It's mostly grammar and usage that you still need to work on, but that's perfectly understandable because of how different our languages are from each other.
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Yes, learning languages is fun. I am impressed you are interested in so many languages! @kaupaint
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@Ace111 I just love humans! I find it interesting how languages can tell you about the people who use it, the cultures.
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