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¿Esto suena natural? I lie in you, too close to feel your sigh
¿Esto suena natural? I lie in you, too close to feel your sigh
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- Inglés (US)
Nada natural
@gustavoriegel31
oh.
he is lying down next to his partner.
So the sentence would be, "I lie next to you, so close I can feel your sigh"
saying in or on partner give the impression that they are stacked one on top of each other.
and "too close to feel your sigh" means that you are so close you can not feel the person next to them. but that does doesn't sound/feel right. that sounds like you're suffocating the person.
does that help? is that closer to what you want to say?
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- Inglés (US)
- Portugués (Brasil)
@yesnnyl he is lying down on his partner like stay together on the bed
- Inglés (US)
Nada natural
@gustavoriegel31
oh.
he is lying down next to his partner.
So the sentence would be, "I lie next to you, so close I can feel your sigh"
saying in or on partner give the impression that they are stacked one on top of each other.
and "too close to feel your sigh" means that you are so close you can not feel the person next to them. but that does doesn't sound/feel right. that sounds like you're suffocating the person.
does that help? is that closer to what you want to say?
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- Portugués (Brasil)
@yesnnyl what can I change?
- Inglés (US)
Nada natural
@gustavoriegel31i up dated my comment. it didn't finish sending. sorry
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- Inglés (US)
Nada natural
@gustavoriegel31 but I would say, "I lie next to you, so close I can feel your sigh"
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