Would anyone be willing to correct my writing? (It is a bit long) 😅😅

See a translation

@Amber_xx Thank you very much!!! 😊😊


"This is a dream to soar,
in search of a sea nowhere to be found.
The boy walks,
with not one but seven hearts.
Seven beats and one stride forward."


This current dream mustn't be hidden nor continue being just a dream; it is meant to turn into a reality rather than keep staying as a dream. The aforementioned sea represents the superficial success, yet cannot be seen from the beginning of the path people take, not even from afar.
This boy, representing people, takes a big step because he is sure enough of what he is doing, albeit not knowing where it will lead him to.

@Amber_xx Omg! Thank you very much! 😊 I didn't expect it, honestly 😂