- Japonés
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Inglés (US)
¿Esto suena natural? He brought cherry pie ,even though I decided not to eat sweets.
- Portugués (Brasil)
Natural
If you say "brought me", the contrast between the sentences becomes more clear. Also, you could use past perfect tense to indicate that "the decision" occurred before the event of "buying cherry pie":
"He brought me cherry pie, even though I had decided not to eat sweets."
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- Portugués (Brasil)
Natural
If you say "brought me", the contrast between the sentences becomes more clear. Also, you could use past perfect tense to indicate that "the decision" occurred before the event of "buying cherry pie":
"He brought me cherry pie, even though I had decided not to eat sweets."
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- Portugués (Brasil)
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Good job :) Your phrase is already good and can be understood. My suggestions were just minor fixes.
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- Japonés
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Principiante
Difícil de entender incluso respuestas cortas en este idioma.
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Principiante-Intermedio
Capaz de hacer preguntas sencillas y puede entender respuestas sencillas.
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Capaz de hacer cualquier tipo de preguntas generales y capaz de entender respuestas semi-largas.
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Avanzado
Capaz de entender respuestas largas y complejas.
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