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13 mar 2018
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Inglés (US)
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¿Esto suena natural? I would like you to correct this to more natural and polite English please.
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The capacity of one private room has four people.
Even though your group members are less than four, one room rate is charged.
¿Esto suena natural? I would like you to correct this to more natural and polite English please.
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The capacity of one private room has four people.
Even though your group members are less than four, one room rate is charged.
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The capacity of one private room has four people.
Even though your group members are less than four, one room rate is charged.

If you have better idea (sentence) about the room rate, please teach me natural English.
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13 mar 2018
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
➡️The capacity of one private room is four people./One private room has a capacity of four people.
➡️Even though your group has less than four members
“One room rate is charged” is in the passive voice which we usually try to avoid. Change it to the active voice! Feel free to ask me if you have questions about passive/active voices :)
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
One private room sleeps four.
Even if your group has less than four people, the rate is charged per room.
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
➡️The capacity of one private room is four people./One private room has a capacity of four people.
➡️Even though your group has less than four members
“One room rate is charged” is in the passive voice which we usually try to avoid. Change it to the active voice! Feel free to ask me if you have questions about passive/active voices :)
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Nice to meet you, fluffyjazz.
Is this "active voice" correct and natural?
Even though your group has less than four members, they charge you one room rate.
Nice to meet you, fluffyjazz.
Is this "active voice" correct and natural?
Even though your group has less than four members, they charge you one room rate.
- Japonés
- Inglés (US)

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