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akatsushis
5 abr 2018

  • Francés (Francia)
  • Japonés
  • Inglés (US)
  • Español (España)
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¿Cómo dices esto en Inglés (US)? can you tell me if my text is correct. At his 8 years old,he wanted to write poetry,musics and theatre plays. But,at 14 years old he stoped school because he is dyslexic, he couldn’t read and write.

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quicksilver1602
5 abr 2018

  • Inglés (US)

I would say "When he was 8 years old, he wanted to write poetry, music, and theatre plays. However, at 14 years old he quit school because he was dyslexic. He couldn't read and write." You can say "at 8 years old", but make sure you take out the word "his".
Also, don't start a sentence with a conjunction like "but". If you want to use it, you should add a comma after plays and make it all one sentence, but that would probably be too long of a sentence. In normal speech (not writing), however, it does not matter.

akatsushis
5 abr 2018

  • Francés (Francia)
@quicksilver1602 okay 🤩 thank you so much 😘
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