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Please point out any errors to me if you find a wrong grammer.
Q:Do you agree or disagree with the idea that we should pay more taxes in order to provide better care for old people?
My A:I disagree with the statment and have two reasons for this.The first reason is that Japan`s pension plan now is sufficient to live.We should py more taxes not to provide better care for old people but to make the educational institution sufficient.The second reason is that there old people who get pensions and use it in order to play golf or play games,and so on.I think that there areold people who waste the pention,so we need not pay more taxes in order to provide better care for old people.
Please point out any errors to me if you find a wrong grammer.
Q:Do you agree or disagree with the idea that we should pay more taxes in order to provide better care for old people?
My A:I disagree with the statment and have two reasons for this.The first reason is that Japan`s pension plan now is sufficient to live.We should py more taxes not to provide better care for old people but to make the educational institution sufficient.The second reason is that there old people who get pensions and use it in order to play golf or play games,and so on.I think that there areold people who waste the pention,so we need not pay more taxes in order to provide better care for old people.
Q:Do you agree or disagree with the idea that we should pay more taxes in order to provide better care for old people?
My A:I disagree with the statment and have two reasons for this.The first reason is that Japan`s pension plan now is sufficient to live.We should py more taxes not to provide better care for old people but to make the educational institution sufficient.The second reason is that there old people who get pensions and use it in order to play golf or play games,and so on.I think that there areold people who waste the pention,so we need not pay more taxes in order to provide better care for old people.
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I have done some corrections, so it would sound better. I hope it will help you.
Q:Do you agree woth the idea, that we should pay more taxes in order to provide better care for old people?
My A:No, I disagree with the statment and have two reasons for this. The first reason is that Japan`s pension plan now is sufficient to live. We should pay more taxes not to provide better care for old people, but to make the education sufficient. The second reason is that old people who get pensions and use it in order to play golf or play games and etc. I think, that there are old people who waste their pentions,so we need not pay more taxes in order to provide better care for old people.
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Why did you put an end(,) in 6 line?( I think, that there are~)
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