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¿Esto suena natural? I can FINALLY get my own life back, finally, after six months of suffering from relationship troubles with online trolls and online bullying.
- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
Two ways to fix:
1. You can remove "own." Split into two sentences.
"I can FINALLY get my life back! Six months of suffering from relationship troubles with online trolls and online bullying is finally over."
^^^this is okay, but "with online trolls" makes this a very wordy, long sentence.
"I can FINALLY get my (own) life back! Six months of suffering from relationship troubles and online bullying is finally over."
2.Change order. I also changed "own" to "old" to get a similar effect, but using more typical phrasing.
"After six months of suffering from relationship troubles with online trolls and online bullying, I can FINALLY get my old life back.
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
Two ways to fix:
1. You can remove "own." Split into two sentences.
"I can FINALLY get my life back! Six months of suffering from relationship troubles with online trolls and online bullying is finally over."
^^^this is okay, but "with online trolls" makes this a very wordy, long sentence.
"I can FINALLY get my (own) life back! Six months of suffering from relationship troubles and online bullying is finally over."
2.Change order. I also changed "own" to "old" to get a similar effect, but using more typical phrasing.
"After six months of suffering from relationship troubles with online trolls and online bullying, I can FINALLY get my old life back.
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