Please correct it about ''my hometown.''

I'm from KOBE in Japan.
Kobe locates next to Osaka and is known as a port town. We have sea and also mountains. The view from mountains are so beautiful. Moreover, the night view is called '' one hundred thousand doller's night view''

the city is famous for sweet such as cake, chocolate. Especially, raw chocolate is tasty. the tast is smooth and melt quickly as soon as you put it into your mouth.
There are modern architectures where foreigners lived in old time.
the city is less crowd than Osaka. you can spend a lot of time relaxing .

I'm from Kobe in Japan.
Kobe is located next to Osaka and is known as a port town. We have the sea nearby as well as the mountains. The views from the mountains are so beautiful. Furthermore, the view at night is called "One Hundred Thousand Dollars Night View"

The city is famous for sweets such as cake and chocolate. The raw chocolate is especially tasty. The taste is smooth and it melts quickly as soon as you put it into your mouth.

There is also a lot of modern architecture where foreigners used to live in old times. The city is less crowded than Osaka, and you can spend a lot of time relaxing there.

よくできました!