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18 ago 2018
- Chino tradicional (Taiwan)
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Inglés (US)
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¿Esto suena natural? Many marbles were being thrown into the mud by the naughty boy.
(Please correct my English if it's wrong. Thanks a lot !)
¿Esto suena natural? Many marbles were being thrown into the mud by the naughty boy.
(Please correct my English if it's wrong. Thanks a lot !)
(Please correct my English if it's wrong. Thanks a lot !)
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19 ago 2018
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
"A lot of" marbles would be preferred to "many" in a regular positive sentence. Also I'd personally use the active voice in this case, speaking normally/casually. "The naughty boy was throwing a lot of/a bunch of marbles into the mud". The sentence you wrote is fine if you want more of a riddle/rhyme-y vibe, but not for normal speech.
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- Inglés (US)
Natural
I see nothing wrong, sounds like a book. Lol
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- Inglés (US)
Natural
It did sound like a sentence from a textbook!😮
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- Inglés (US)
Natural
It’s a fine example of the passive voice.
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- Francés (Francia)
Natural
It's perfect if you want to insist on the fact that the naughty boy is doing it at this moment particularly !
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- Inglés (US)
Poco natural
"A lot of" marbles would be preferred to "many" in a regular positive sentence. Also I'd personally use the active voice in this case, speaking normally/casually. "The naughty boy was throwing a lot of/a bunch of marbles into the mud". The sentence you wrote is fine if you want more of a riddle/rhyme-y vibe, but not for normal speech.
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- Chino tradicional (Taiwan)
@CommanderKeen How many marbles …mmm…I don't know, but thank you for your voice. 👍😊
- Chino tradicional (Taiwan)
@xue4822056 许多弹珠被这个顽皮的小男孩丢进泥泞里。
我先写了主动的语态:The naughty boy was throwing many marbles into the mud. 再练习写成这句被动语态…
我先写了主动的语态:The naughty boy was throwing many marbles into the mud. 再练习写成这句被动语态…
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