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as the concert finished, i heard someone call my name. i returned, that was my idol. i shouted:"it can't be a dream. My idol stood in from of me". He said" Surprise, today i give you a present.It call the trip of young. Can you join ?".i said yes. After that, we drove to Da Lat. We have camped here and had some Da Lat wine. we were also saw fireflies. They were beautiful. I think it was memorable time in my life. Thanks my idols for letting me be a part of your journey of youth.

as the concert finished, i heard someone call my name. i TURNED BACK, AND SAW IT WAS MY IDOL. i shouted, "THIS can't be a dream. My idol IS STANDING in froNT of me.” He said" Surprise, today i’M GOING TO GIVE YOU a present. I call IT the trip of young. Can you join ?". i said yes. After that, we drove to Da Lat. We camped THERE and had some Da Lat wine. we also saw fireflies. They were beautiful. I think it was A memorable time. THANK YOU TO my idol for letting me be a part of your journey of youtH

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